- Good synchronous editing. - Love the consistency of 8-bit style. - Excellent use of intertextual references. - Maybe a wider range of shots and camera movements could assist the pacing of the song.
I agree with Joe, editing is excellent and synchronous throughout, and your intertextual references to your audiences' subculture are great. I think you need more though!
In addition, you certainly need a wider range of shots to gain a Level 4 mark, it is dominated at the moment by MS and MLS. Consider high/low/canted angles, perhaps further close ups as well.
- Good synchronous editing.
ReplyDelete- Love the consistency of 8-bit style.
- Excellent use of intertextual references.
- Maybe a wider range of shots and camera movements could assist the pacing of the song.
I agree with Joe, editing is excellent and synchronous throughout, and your intertextual references to your audiences' subculture are great. I think you need more though!
ReplyDeleteIn addition, you certainly need a wider range of shots to gain a Level 4 mark, it is dominated at the moment by MS and MLS. Consider high/low/canted angles, perhaps further close ups as well.